Monday, April 30, 2012

Year Reflection


  This year has been a huge learning experience for me.  Besides all the different academic lessons I’ve learned, I also learned a lot socially and physically.  But what I would like to focus on more is the academic things.  The very first day of school when Dr. D told us everything we would be doing throughout the year and all of the different assignments we would be having, I knew this would be a tough class and that I was going to have a lot to handle for the school year, academic wise.  Especially when we wrote a paper the first week of school!  After writing that first paper I knew that from then on, I really needed to buckle down and make sure I paid attention every day in class and made sure that everything I wrote was to the best of my ability. 

  Ever since I was pretty young, I’ve always shown as my mom says “pretty impressive talent” in writing, and I’ve loved it even more.  But, I have to say that once we started writing the real hardcore papers this year and I actually learned how to write properly such as being formal in my writing, using correct grammar, using proper sentence structure and fluency ect. my liking for writing sort of decreased.  Certain papers were really difficult and learning how to write them was even more difficult. 

  One particular paper, the literary analysis… I’m sure we all remember that one.  That was probably the hardest challenge I was faced with this year.  I remember when we were assigned to pick a short story and I remember not taking the assignment very seriously.  Well, I kind of just picked a book off the shelf and I read only 2 stories before I found the one I wanted to do my analysis on.  I didn’t pick wisely because I wasn’t aware we would be using the story for something more important later on.  Well, then we began to start working on the analysis and I had no idea what the heck I was doing, I wrote and rewrote and rewrote again!  I even changed the viewpoint on my entire essay after I had already written the entire thing.  That was a big learning experience.  I learned how to manage my time and that I needed to take every assignment seriously and do it to the absolute best of my ability no matter how big or small.  I also learned that when writing, think of as many ideas as possible when brainstorming what topic to pick or what to write about so that you, as a writer can pick the best one and you can have a good paper.  I realized that I needed to not procrastinate my writing and that I needed to work on a little bit every day and that if I am ever confused, I need to go to a teacher.

Some things I noticed when going back and looking over my papers from the year was the amount of improvement I made this year.  On the first paper we wrote which was the Literacy Narrative, I got all 8.5’s and 9.5’s which was really good!  While looking through my other work, I noticed that on the literacy analysis I got a C in the organization but mostly A’s and a couple B’s in the other categories.  Then, in my Reaserch paper which was probably one of the best essays I have ever written by far I received an A in that category along with all the other categories except voice and conventions- citations/MLA format.  That didn’t really come as a surprise to me because I had a difficult time understanding that even after paying very close attention in class and going to see Dr. D outside of class!  Getting down the whole citation thing, weather it be a quote from the book (literary analysis) or a quote from a database (research paper), was really difficult for me this year and that was probably my lowest point.

  My grades were exceptionally good this year, which was not what I was expecting when the year began!  Every time I found out we were writing a new paper I got very nervous because even though I really enjoy writing, I always have a very difficult time beginning.  But once I get going, the ideas flow through me onto the computer naturally.  I wish it were that easy from the beginning.  It really shows if you look at all my work carefully because the opening paragraph for my every single one of my drafts is different from the final!  Something else I started realizing this year that I am having a hard time with is my vocabulary.  I am lacking voab skills big time…  And I was talking to one of my friend’s mom and she told me that I needed to read more and it would help me to bring up my reading level and it would help my vocabulary; so one of my goals for the end of this year and this summer is to read as much as I possibly can and bring my reading level up and learn a lot of new words.

  I have a lot of goals for the upcoming year considering the improvement I have made and the improvement I want to make.  Now that I realize the amount of improvement I can make in a year I know that I can make just as much improvement next year.  Next year, like I said before I want to bring my reading level up and increase my vocabulary.  I also would like to become a better writer, as most people probably aspire for also.  But when I say I want to become a better writer I mean that I want to be able to understand the assignment right away, or at least quicker than this year, and I want to be able to dive into some sort of writing process as soon as possible.  I noticed that in my work this year I would spend a lot of time figuring out what I was supposed to be doing and what kind of writing we were doing.  Another goal I have for next year is to maintain my ability to make an A because I’m pretty sure I held an A throughout the entire year!  Finally I would like to become a better reader and by that I mean I would like to improve in my reading comprehension because I find that I struggle with understanding what I am reading.  And sometimes even recognizing who is talking!  The final thing I wanted to talk about was my WRAP scores, which were fantastic! I got all 4.5's and 5's! I'm pretty sure that was an improvement from last year which is great.  That is just proof that if I sit down and focus on what I'm doing, I can do really good work.

  All in all, this has been a great year and I really did learn a lot inside and outside of English class!  I definitely think that my writing and reading skills improved a lot and that I became an even better writing that I was last year.  My reading has a little ways to go but I know that we are going to be doing a lot of work with that next year and I’m excited to become a better reader!  I’m hoping my teacher is good next year because Dr. D was great and she really knew her subject! 

Common Errors List:
*Use a hyphen in between a number and the word that the amount is being described.
-ex: 5-pages


*Missing comma.  Things can be misread.
-ex: You start off with someone holding on to you, but as you get more advanced and learn more and more, you no longer need the extra hand.

*Misspell Tis
-ex: Tis the season to be jolly!

*Italic the name of a company
-ex: “Securing Maternal Health through comprehensive Reproductive services”           

*Misspelling the word Research
-ex: We have a research paper due on next Monday.

Sunday, April 22, 2012

Monday, April 16, 2012

The Hunger Games

  Over the spring break I went to the beach and while I was there I had plenty of time to lay out and read!  As those of you who follow my blog know, I've been reading the Hunger Games.  I'm nearly done but I still have a little ways to go before I finish. Currently I am at the part where Katniss and Peeta are together inside of the cave and she is helping him get well.  He has blood poisoning and Katniss is trying to help him get better.  The game makers have just made a change in the rules to where 2 tributes from the same district can win if they are the last ones in the game!  Well I am predicting Katniss wins but Petta dies very close to the end, like he is one of the last few left in the games.

  Also, since Petta betrayed Katniss in the beginning of the book, I kind of have a feeling in my gut that he is going to do it again, or do something detrimental to Katniss, but she will find a way out of it.  I'm really enjoying this book because it is so thrilling and full of action!! I can never put it down when I'm supposed to but at times I am sort of  forced to.  I really recommend it to anyone (girl or boy) looking to find a good book to read.  I think that by next week, I'll be posting my final blog about the Hunger Games and I can't wait to find out who wins and what happens next! I know I always say that but the urge to want to know what comes next in this book is just so great, I can't help it!  I love this book.

Reading Log:  The Hunger Games 150 minutes-68 pages

Sunday, April 15, 2012

Crazy Girl

"Crazy Girl" Eli Young Band
Baby why you wanna cry? 
You really oughta know that I 
Just have to walk away sometimes 
We're gonna do what lovers do 
We're gonna have a fight or two 
But I ain't ever changin' my mind 

Crazy girl, don't you know that I love you? 
And I wouldn't dream of goin' nowhere 
Silly woman, come here, let me hold you 
Have I told you lately? 
I love you like crazy, girl 

Wouldn't last a single day 
I'd probably just fade away 
Without you, I'd lose my mind 
Before you ever came along 
I was livin' life all wrong 
Smartest thing I ever did was make you all mine 

Crazy girl, don't you know that I love you? 
And I wouldn't dream of goin' nowhere 
Silly woman, come here, let me hold you 
Have I told you lately? 
I love you like crazy, girl 

Crazy girl 

Crazy girl, don't you know that I love you? 
And I wouldn't dream of goin' nowhere 
Silly woman, come here, let me hold you 
Have I told you lately, 
I love you like 

Crazy, girl, don't you know that I love you? 
And I wouldn't dream of goin' nowhere 
Silly woman, come here, let me hold you 
Have I told you lately? 
I love you like crazy, girl 

Like crazy 
Crazy girl 
Like crazy 
Crazy girl 
Like crazy


  These are the lyrics to one of my favorite songs EVER, Crazy Girl by Eli Young Band, and I just realized that it actually has a lot of literary devices in it that we've been talking about in class over the last couple weeks.  This form/type of poetry is Lyric, obviously.  Some things I noticed throughout the song were repeating vowel sounds, assonance, in the first and second verse. Examples: "Baby why you wanna cryYou really oughta know that I..." "We're gonna do what lovers do We're gonna have a fight or two..." "Wouldn't last a single day I'd probably just fade away..." "Before you ever came along I was livin' life all wrong..."  So those are a few examples of repeating vowel sounds.  


  Another thing I noticed in this song was that most of those examples I gave you were also couplets, which if you did not remember are:
A unit of verse consisting of two successive lines, usually rhyming and having the same meter and often forming a complete thought or syntactic unit.
Also, I noticed a few Enjambments and caesuras. This example is an entire stanza long which I also found interesting.  
"Wouldn't last a single day 
I'd probably just fade away 
Without you, I'd lose my mind 
Before you ever came along 
I was livin' life all wrong 
Smartest thing I ever did was make you all mine"  
If you'll notice, the comma in between you and I'd is the caesura and all the other lines are examples of enjambment.  I found the line breaks in this song very interesting because the line breaks at a point that it was as if a comma could be there or even in some cases a period.  So that was something else I noticed!  Later fellow bloggers, can't wait to read your songs. (:
xoxo
Emily

Sunday, April 1, 2012

The Hunger Games Continues...

  I know, I've been reading the Hunger Games forever!  But I just don't have as much time as I would like to be able to sit down and force myself to finish the book.  But, I am really enjoying it!  I am close to finishing it right now and as soon as I finish, I plan to read the next 2 books in the series!  I am currently on chapter 14 and our narrater, Katniss, has just been informed by little Rue the only 12 year old tribute in the games, that a tracker jacker nest is directly above her head.  Tracker jackers are basically wasps but their sting is way more painful and dangerous and can actually lead to death.  Panicking, Katniss struggles while trying to figure out what she should do in this difficult situation because directly above her is death as well as directly below her because the careers are also below her.  This is for sure one of the high points of the book because there are so many possibilities of what can happen.  Rue motions for Katniss to saw the tracker jacker nest and tells her to cut it off so that it will fall right on to the careers.  Horary for Rue!  Thats a genius idea because (1) the venomous little stinging beasts will be away from Katniss and (2) the tracker jackers could possibly kill a few of the careers which would help Katniss out tremendously.

  I thought this was very brave of Rue because I know that I wouldn't have been brave enough to talk to any of the other tributes because I would be scared that they would kill me!  However, Rue sucked it up and helped an enemy out rather than killing her!  Which really makes me happy(:  And to make it better, Katniss, well so far, hasn't done anything to harm her either.  Since I saw the movie, I sort of already know what is going to happen BUT I will not let myself be reminded of that because I want to read it and find out for myself.  This book has been amazing so far and I can't wait to see what happens between Rue and Katniss and see how the book conveys it differently from the movie.  Fight on...

Reading Log:  The Hunger Games  35 pages-80 minutes
                        Nikki-Rosa               1 page-25 minutes
                        World History TBK 24 pages-45 minutes

"Nikki-Rosa" by Nikki Giovanni Analysis

  A while back Nikki Giovanni came to school during announcements one day and performed a few of her poems.  They were magnificent and I really enjoyed her presence!  So I decided to analyze one of her poems since I've previously enjoyed some of her work so much.  Here is the poem:


childhood remembrances are always a drag
if you're Black
you always remember things like living in Woodlawn
with no inside toilet
and if you become famous or something
they never talk about how happy you were to have your mother
all to yourself and
how good the water felt when you got your bath from one of those
big tubs that folk in Chicago barbecue in
and somehow when you talk about home
it never gets across how much you
understood their feelings
as the whole family attended meetings about Hollydale
and even though you remember
your biographers never understand
your father's
pain as he sells his stock
and another dream goes
and though you're poor it isn't poverty that
concerns you
and though they fight a lot
it isn't your father's drinking that makes any difference
but only that everybody is together and you
and your sister have happy birthdays and very good
Christmases
and I really hope no white person ever has cause to write about me
because they never understand that Black love is Black wealth and they'll
probably talk about my hard childhood and never understand that
 all the while I was quite happy.


This was a very interesting poem because I think that its always pretty intriguing to read about someones hardships and struggles but to then see how they were content and happy in the end.  I noticed a lot throughout this poem.  Right off the bat I noticed that she didn't start her poem with a capital letter and that there is no punctuation throughout the entire poem besides the very last period.  No commas, quotation marks, periods or anything.  So then as I observed the poem more closely and re-read it, I noticed that the line breaks were sort of odd (I copied the line breaks in the poem on my blog as they are from the book) and I thought that the line breaks could possibly replace the punctuation marks.  I also noticed, from the begging that there were no stanzas and that it was just one big long poem.

  Besides things that have to do with spelling and placement of punctional marks, I also noticed a few deeper thinking things.  If you'll notice, the author doesn't ever address who she is writing to or about, she just consistently uses the replacement words "you" and "they."  I highlighted all of these places in my poem book because there were a lot of them!  Something else I realized by the end of reading the poem is that the author capitalized the "B" in the word black in the 3 times she used it throughout the poem.  I'm kind of curious as to why she would do that.  Something that I interpreted in the poem that could have been read in another way was about gratefulness.  In the lines, "but only that everybody is together and you and your sister have happy birthdays and very good Christmases" I thought that the author was referring to be grateful and thankful for what you have.  In conclusion, I noticed that the author talked about how happy she was to receive certain opportunities throughout her life and talked about how life was hard but then she concludes by saying that she was perfectly content and happy with the way her life was and she makes it seem like she wouldn't want it any other way.